Tuesday 7 August 2018

Argument Writing- Why should animals not be in Circuses?

Argument Writing

This week we are focusing on Argument Writing. I have been writing about why should animals not be in circuses? 


I think they should be in there natural habitat because then they would be a lot safer rather than getting hurt every now and then. They lose their dignity, and they are getting hurt. 
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3 comments:

  1. Unknown27 August 2018 at 14:22

    Kia Ora Caitlyn, it's Abbie here from Mamaku 2,I strongly believe what you are saying is true. They should not be kept in circuses because it is animal cruelty. The animals will be much happier kept in zoos or even better their natural habitat. You have a lot of great arguments here. Keep up the great work.
    Good bye,from Abbie

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    1. Unknown27 August 2018 at 17:10

      Thanks, for the comment Abbie! Your awesome.

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  2. Unknown27 August 2018 at 14:31

    Hello Caitlyn K,

    It's Angel here from Grey Main School, Mamaku Hub. I absolutely strongly agree that animals should not be in circuses. Have you ever been to a circus and if you have how many times have you been?

    I love the way you made a title page and a conclusion at the start of the 2nd page. Maybe next time you could say a couple more reasons on why they shouldn't be in a circus just because most of the reasons were because of the cages.

    Keep up the great work. Kind regards Angel M : )

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.

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